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**15 min sketch**

omg! it's been like a week since i have drawn anything!

:star: about commissions i owe: don;t worry tomorrow it's my last time in school! so im going to draw this hole weekend yay for that!

:star: about RFTS: more pages coming soon!!

and for the comments... i'll answer all of them soon too!(i hope >_< )

love ya guys!! ~:heart: hope you like it, this is a part of RFTS (:star:) <-- yay for stars!

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Kian (c) =NeKoChAnK

Katrina (c) =NeKoChAnK

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if you don't like it ... don't look at!
Constructive critics are welcome


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Critiques


:iconemerysmallor:
I really like this piece. I think its going in the right direction but does lack a sense of perfect structure. Perfection is not always the best thing, but in this case they are small details of anatomy and body structure. Those tend to be noticeable, things like: the guy's torso (length is off); The girl's arm (shoulder seems off); the guy's jaw line. I also notice issues over the shadowing but they may be there for transition of you lighting effect. I think it would be easily fixed with more contrast between the shadows. All these thing are small details and obviously you have much skill. I hope to see your art become the perfect reflection of your intent and dreams.
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:iconkanko-yot:
This is a lovely picture very calm and peaceful but
You need to work anatomy. There is a lot of approximative things, woman arm, guy's muscles, faces symmetry and volume. Your bodies need more construction. To draw correctly anatomy you need to understand it. Maybe you should take a look on [link]'s very helpful to know how to place muscles.Color is slightly approximative too. Your shadows needs to be stronger, glow effect is not really mastered.
By the way, the whole picture looks lovely and save your art misses. :) I hope I'm not rude. I think you can do better time after time!
keep the good work!
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:iconmeranemone:
oh it's great. very charming too^^
they're so cute together<3

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looks good

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:iconbrianna-dawn:
awe there so cute together :)

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Very great!

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:iconkaname-chan:
I find this very sweet. The pose and the expressions.
Its sentimental in my eyes. And gentle :hug:

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:iconstarocean912:
Very cute hun :D. Love it when there like this together.

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:iconartictiger:
OMG too cute, I love the band-aid on Kian's nose ;p hehe

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:iconbloodlust-ninja:
How cute! ^^ I wish I could be able to lay with my girl like that... '>_>
:iconkaiju-z:
aww sweet X3

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